Searria H.

Oh, wait! It's in dialogue. Um...Normally, I would say "he is," but that would be the only present tense you have in that paragraph of dialogue, so....I'm still thinking "he ...

Okay, because I'm obsessive compulsive and it won't allow me to edit my review, I'm going to make a correction here. The fourth quoted passage should look like this: She ...

Hey, there!

Psh. Once you understand how it works, it's an easy thing to fix. :)

Thanks for the reviews, guys! :) Originally, this came from a dream I had about an author talking with one of her characters. I am a huge fan of dialogue ...

Haha! Thanks, Bunny. It chokes me up too, but for a different reason. ;) Of course it makes sense to me because I know the surrounding context. Sorry about that. ...

No problem. I know how that is. I'm a cellist, myself, so I think the cello can do pretty much anything. *smiles proudly* :wink: What??????? Why? :evil: Fine. I'll just ...

Edited. Thanks Everyone! :D -Sea-

Yay! Edited. Getting much better, but I still have a few nit-picks. :D First of all, are Neeco, and Neko pronounced the same? I think I know how to pronounce ...

umm..Squall? She was using personification. It's a type of figurative language. :D -Sea-

Thanks all. Yeah, this is my first story where my characters are...hurt. I'll add more descriptions. -Sea-

:lol: Thanks everybody. Yeah, My guinea pig used to be really fat, but now he's really sick with something, so he's really thin. He's hanging in there though!

Okay. Interesting story. I enjoyed the storyline. I just have a few spelling and grammar corrections. She went running up the stairs to the small , crampt room Hunter slept ...

Okay. Interesting story. I enjoyed the storyline. I just have a few spelling and grammar corrections. She went running up the stairs to the small , crampt room Hunter slept ...